The Vicar is back

The people living in the village think that the ghost of the murdered vicar is back, to get revenge on the smugglers who tied him up and left  him to die.
The villagers have seen a light flickering on and off at the church, and the elderly couple who live at number five are very scared. They are too frightened to even go to sleep.
Yesterday every one heard someone scream and rushed to  the  church. There seemed  to be a smuggler on the floor, bleeding to death. Every one stared at him, before he faded away to nothing.

Kaine, Douglas Primary

Comments

[Kayum]

I like this writing because you get a feeling of what's going to happen next.

[Iqarah]

I like the title, it is very interesting and a little frightening too. I have read your newspaper article and it is very enthusiastic and brilliant too.