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Smugglers

Below the cliff tunnels

Things are living in the bare cell.

People describe these things with nasty words.

They give you the creeps

While you are in bed

You wouldn't like to meet them.

They are evil and greedy and extremely fat.

Beards which are hairy.

In the mouth,

You will find crooked teeth.

These things are known as smugglers

They are tattoed all over,

And they are watching you.

Jayne. Southwold Primary

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Smugglers

Below the Cliffs

Sly Smugglers would watch

For cargo ships sailing by.

Wicked strong men

Looking for something to steal.

Walking around Mysteriously

Showing crooked teeth

A grusesome smile upon their face.

Letting out smelly, bad breath

Flaky wrinkeld skin is seen

Dirty mud smeared on top

And hair curled around the legs.

Eleanor. Southwold Primary

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Smugglers

Below the cliff

Croaky voiced Smugglers hid

Crooked teeeth, plump and greedy

Selfish, viscous and bad

Smelly and strong

Nasty and Sly

Evil and wicked

With wrinkled faces they hide

In the caves for a ship to come roaring onto the rocks

The greedy smugglers hide teh cargo in the cave

While people go for help

Joseph. Southwold Primary

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Smugglers

Down below the dark deep cliff

The hairy

Disgusting

Wicked Smugglers sat

Planning

Until the cargo ship came by.

Samera. Southwold Primary

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Smugglers

Below the cliff

Croaky voices came

From wicked stinky and crafty smugglers

Wating for a chance to hijack

The nearest ship

Trying to steal the precious belongings

How they laugh

It gives you the creeps.

Jessica. Southwold Primary

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